uuh ok heres my constructive criticism, it’s badly made, is messy, is cringe and has bad grammar
a lot of people say "it's [blank]" from what i know !! ive never really heard anyone say "is [blank]" tbh,, if you really wanna be picky about coherency then wouldn't you say, "it's [blank], [blank], and [blank]"? i can see a little better how this game wouldn't be your cup of tea from the vns you like, but i dont think its the best to say its "genuinely terrible" when its just not your cup of tea??
its totes fine to be disappointed with the game!! theres a ton of hype for this vn + the concept was pretty good, but i dont think the messiness of the style is the product of a bad artist and is rather to add to the atmosphere!! a ton of other people totally love this game, so i dont mean to say youre wrong, but i do think this just might not be something thats your taste, and thats totes fine!!