It's amazing to see how much you progressed in art in such a short time between WIKY and WIFL, but honestly the writing was just as good as always. In fact, I liked Callum as a character more than Mylo for the simple fact I feel he made fewer mistakes in the first half. I just basically loved every character, honestly, despite everything that happens. The plot kept me hooked, Marcus had me hooked, their relationship had me hooked, just, yes.
Also, I screenshotted Marcus's appearance at the end of WIFL so I could refer back to it throughout my readthrough because oh my god he just looks so real and beautiful and boopable