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Thank you so much for your work! The game is getting more interesting and exciting every time. I'm looking forward to the new updates every time.

Let me make a few suggestions about the game's storyline. You might find some of them interesting.

Margaret introduces Henry to her father. Knowing that he will soon die due to his illness, her father teaches Henry how to bake bread. Meanwhile, Henry begins to make advances towards Margaret while helping her at the market. After a while, Margaret's father passes away, and she invites Henry and Agnes to move in with her. Fearing that Margaret will reject him due to his inexperience, Henry pressures Agnes to teach him how to please a woman. As a result, Agnes teaches Henry how to perform cunnilingus and later how to have sex.

Otto catches Agnes in the storeroom either while she's masturbating or while she's changing clothes, and he starts making a pass at her. It could be divided into several stages, but it ultimately ends with Otto having sex with Agnes.

After her father's death, Margaret takes a job as a cook at Otto's tavern, and sometimes she helps Agnes in the dining room or takes her shifts.

During a late return from a tavern, Agnes is arrested by the guards and placed in a cell. Later that night, they have sex with her.

It would be possible to continue the storyline with Gideon, in which he would eventually provide some assistance to Agnes in order to leave. During the course of the storyline, it would be possible to create moments of interaction that would lead to various stages of Agnes's corruption.

Add a glory hole to the game ((as others have suggested). First, in the market during another promotion, and then in the tavern's bathroom.

Add more animated scenes instead of static ones.

It would be a good idea to expand Agnes's clothing selection.

It would be interesting to know what is planned to be placed in the harbor, and what events are planned there.

Sorry for the long text. Perhaps something from the proposed will be interesting to you for further creation and development of the game.

As I mentioned above, I am looking forward to the continuation of the game. I am very interested in the new events that will take place in the game, as well as the possible changes to existing events.

I also apologize for the quality of the text, as I had to use an online translator.