The writing is good, but I know you write stories and all that so I guess it's natural to have funnies and nothing cringeworthy, however I kinda dislike how passive the main character is at times like my man (or woman) could talk back in many situations💀 I know this evil gal can melt his/her brain, torture him/her etc., but man c'mon a little 'oh sucks to hear you're an asshole' wouldn't hurt. Visually also interesting looking game I like the artwork though once again what I hate about it is that it's lacking a bit of variety regarding foot structure, I'm no snob but I like when feet look different from each other (e.g. the balls of the feet are more fat/wide, the toes are shorter/tighter/bigger, the arches are more loose or more pronounced) although it works fine for me with these three girls' feet I've seen. So far good work, my dude! Nothing but love ❤