I really like the setup and most of the ideas in The Mind Society, and the writing is good; I would like to go on praising this game, but I have to point out one of it's biggest problems; lack of actual choices. Several times in this game, the MC will use his power automatically. I think it should be up to the player. I also think the player should decide who they want the MC to be in a relationship with. While I love the character of Alex, I like women who are strong and beautiful, I know there are others who aren't into muscle mamas. Heck I don't like that bitchy landlady character (sorry I forgot her name), and would like to see Alex throw her out of the house, instead of MC 'do her'. I feel a missed opportunity in the new update is, if the MC has taken the Jenny route, instead of the threesome with Stacy happening anyway (which feels out of nowhere on that route), Jenny asks MC who he'd like to use on that afternoons photo shoot (the principle, any of the teachers, etc.) You do get the idea right? Sorry if I'm rambling, but I do actually like this game, and like to see it succeed. More choices, more branching paths, and keep up the good writing. Good Luck.