I think this piece is super solid! I enjoyed it beginning to end. I think the form was fitting and what I liked the most was the use of the vocals. Reversing them at points added a ton for me, not to mention the instruments were a good fit too. Very nice use of bird chirps in the background as well. Not everyone would think of a melodica (pretty sure that's what that is) as well, so I liked the creativity there. Maybe adding some more woodwind instruments would be cool if you ever think of extending the piece a bit. Cello with bassoon is an amazing combo and creates a beautiful texture. Hmm... maybe some cello pizzicato would have been a cool addition to this piece as well. The piano and glockenspiel doubling is great! Just really solid orchestration.