I think the piece could use a bit more energy for being a "Final Stand." Maybe upping the tempo or using a bigger orchestration could be things to look at. That and I agree that a B section would fit the piece well with some variation in the low strings perhaps.
Thanks EPeterson! definitely! Thanks for the feedback! My original thought for this piece was about the feeling of tension from the knight seeing this dragon for the first time that he has to fight. this piece does need a resolve or a sense of stress with a increase in tempo and more variation to help create that emotion. :)