I enjoyed this one a lot! The art was so cool and the CGs were so effective! Jinx is an ass but in a way that's really compelling and enjoyable, and Avery has a surprising flaw for someone who seems so sweet. Despite this whole jam theme being "toxic yuri" in the end I kinda wanted to see it work out anyway... But the ending was a pretty inevitable conclusion, I think! Edit: I forgot to add that I loved how the Shakespeare was interwoven with the actual story and made those moments feel more meaningful, and not just as theater set dressing!
I enjoyed reading the author's notes and backstage art. I too reused characters I've had for years in my jam entry and it's a little scary to think this is the first way they are presented to the world. But nothing stops you from making more and more! And I think Jinx and Avery deserve that. Also good job on the music even though you felt amateur about it! I really liked it!