so i really have a lot to say about it , unfortunatly i might not have the words or just have the proper ways to phrase it haha!!
for a bit of context im kaworu from art fight , ive been thinking about your game since day one and really reserved it for the night before my flight , i never forgot about it. It might even been one of my favorites now!!
the first thing i have to say is that your art does NOT disapoint , you have a great anatomy , and i love the colors you pick especially for shading , the pen you use fits really well everything , and i loved how much attention you paid for details , such as sumai's nails (a character that i love even more despite his heartbreaking cg's) give my baby a good life i beg!!
your story is very well written , maybe one of the best ive played...and i have tried more than a hundred , it is actually full on lore and work ,you have my applause for it i love learning more about your character , pheles wont leave my mind until a very long time either , i cant wait for his route!!
they all seem really well written and even their dialoges are cohesive with their personnality that you keep along the whole story , lets not talk about the soundtrack , it was what captivated me the most on first sight , i absolutly ADORE IT!! it feels like you trully live the story , it isnt noisy or out of place!! i couldnt have asked for a better visual novel , i want to know more about all of them since it seems like they all are a bit related in some way so i cant wait for the full version!! (which i would drop my money for with no doubt)
sorry that it seem a bit long , i really wanted to give you a true feedback to thank you for what you have done for me and also match the quality to you game and time you dedicated to it!! lots of love , samata for the game!! (side note i saw that you where french after i checked your insta...should have told you i was too haha!! so please if you do answer just know you can write in french so i dont make it harder for you! im just more used to english myself)
the chara design also do not let out , they all fit their enviroment , i wish i could have thought of the same for my own characters since this is a vibe i really appreciate and look into. i hope i would one day be able to meet you throught a convention it would be a dream!
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Hi Kaworu ! Thank you so much for playing and taking time to give me detailed feedback omg !
GHGJB and thank you SO much I'm so glad you liked it !! ;; So glad you liked the story and characters, I'm even more flattered if you played a lot of other VNs ! I'm happy you like Sumaï since you drew him for me !
So you like Pheles, he really is the popular boy ! I hope his route won't disappoint you ˖⁺‧₊ And yes the music is incredible and fit perfectly, I'm so glad I found it !
(I'm responding in english so I keep this page content in english but didn't know you were french too !! Did you play the game in french?
Also I sometimes have a booth on french conventions (I'll be at Art to Play in Nantes this year but I usually do conventions around Paris so maybe we'll be able to meet there one day !))
Samata for you comment ! ˖⁺‧₊ (sorry it was so cute that you used this word...) I'm so glad you seem to like every aspect of the game, I hope you'll like the full version as well, also the full version will be completely free-to-play don't worry !