Hi Yarow! Hahaha, great post.
Thanks for pointing out the errors in the text. I'll fix them right now and release a hotfix as soon as possible.
I recommend upgrading to version 2. I remade the cutscenes and removed unnecessary text. The cutscenes in version 1 were too fast, so I decided to change them.
Regarding the sound, I'm trying to find some time to record a good soundtrack. The game will probably have a matching soundtrack in a couple of updates.