Don't worry about the pacing and or making it slow burn! Shift 1 creeped me out in a good way if that makes sense. The ambience of it all just made me feel uncomfortable you know? But in a good way! lol. When the water bottle was left outside of MC's apartment I was so creeped out. And now after shift 2 I'm scared of Biker Boy. Like his presence just makes my stomach drop now. WOW it's going to be difficult for me to explore his route lol. ANYWAYS all this to say that I think the pacing is good!