I love the main characters sick hairdo. His general look and animation style SCREAMS Pivot Animator to me, which I love. I'm not a fan of the stereo panning of the tornado siren sound, it seems to be centered around the coat hanger(?), which doesn't make sense "in universe". At first I thought it was just panned hard to the left because the tornado siren was over there, but then I went outside and noticed that the sound was centered right around there.
Great interpretation of the theme, and I like that all the art is your own!