Judging from the comments, a lot of my critisms have already been spoken and acknowledged. Aside from a desire for more save slots, because there is so many ways to play this and so many outcomes that having the ability to make as many save games as you want, copy saves so you can just start from X point, and delete saves you don't want, would be incredibly nice. But that's also something to consider later, once the game plays well. I'll just make do with only 3 saves for being eaten every fight, struggling through as Lunalyn, and devouring everyone as first Budgie (Mimi for me) for now.
Since that's it for my critiques, here's some praise: This is a rather unique play on a vore game and an excellent one. It lets you play whatever way appeals to you. If you like the feel of a prey fighting for their life against predators out to get them, you can do that and are rewarded for doing that (with health, currently). If you are just here for the vore, you don't have to fight a thing (aside from the non-perma preds) and can just let yourself be eaten, then continue on as your pred to be eaten by whoever is next, no matter how indignant. Or, you can fight to survive as the character you want to be (once you get eaten by them). Beautiful concept for a game and one that will be worth keeping an eye on as it grows, develops, and gets more than few bugs fixed up. This is starting out strong, Lunalyn, keep it up!