My issue is the talk between the mc and Keith, while i Do understand Keith is the mc's favorite idol. They way they acted in my own opinion was very childish and very cringish. I do wish they kept like fan meet idol, but I hoped mc kept a more professional setting and another thing is the bedroom scene, it feels weird for them to just dismiss everything. Like my bro, you were just given a near heart attack by being followed the least you would do is just "Let me take a shower and be over with" maybe in the new version they actually show intense fear by not sleeping in their room and constantly looking around. Third is how the "love triangle", it's weird.
In the update I wish for mc to have more dialogue choosing especially in the start of the games. I feel as if a lot conversations can lead to many routes.
I will give my points, it's a very good start, the base is not bad, characters well drawn and put out. Good details, slightly intense scene. For this love triangle to honestly work well. Is if the mc only sees Keith as just an Idol, like he is the persons type, but it doesn't go beyond that, maybe in the update we can have few moments to really detail why Keith is doing such great lengths. I want it to be like Kethan which is my second fav character well made.
These are just my thinking of fully playing this game.