That was an amazing way to end off with Griff route. I can't wait for future updates. Also wanted to give a little grammar help with commas. You often are using commas incorrectly. yes, that's a thing apparently lol. so basically, when you form a structure of sentence. you have Subject, verb and complete thought. That's also know as independent clause. so basically, when you add another Subject, verb and complete thought on other side of it it's called a comma splice. And sentence is incorrect. But the fix to it is adding an ";" or an "." Or you can add an coordination conjunction. 
also second image I can't read words beacuse the buttons are in the way. Anywho great novel i love it so much can't wait for more updates.