Beautiful, raw, captivating. The presentation is amazing with all the little unique touches for each scene, and the prose is like a fist around your heart. I loved the use of colour, and the noodles scene was particularly memorable with the way Amarys' bowl empties like a ticking clock. I love, love, love yuri where women are obsessed with each other in extremely unhealthy ways, and the setup of idol/ex-idol rather than the more one-sided idol/fan made the parasociality here deliciously twisted.
(I do agree with a previous comment that the all-caps font can be a little hard to read, but that's my only real criticism)