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This was a lovely short read!  I enjoy a lot what you did with the utilization of type font throughout in order to express things about the systems/happenings.  There's a lot of little things you do with sound and flat colors in order to save your resources for other things - focus on words or the expressions that Kaoru makes once she appears.  The very dead-eyed expression she makes at the end is particularly my favorite, but perhaps that's an easy pick considering.


I also like what you did with the illusion of choice here.  I read through it a couple of times and just thought about it.  I like the implication around what Enna is versus how Kaoru may exist as a handler.  It feels like there's more to Enna that she doesn't know about herself - something that Kaoru knows but is refusing to tell her.  The constant repetition of her asking Enna to be a 'good girl'.  There's a lot of light details around events that make me ask questions and that's always a good thing in a short VN of this style.  I'll be keeping an eye on your future projects!

Thank you for playing and for such a thoughtful review! It was such an interesting challenge working within such strict limitations, and I think I was able to take good advantage of what I had to work with. :D Of course I had my own thoughts about "what's really going on" as I was writing it, but my biggest hope was that people would be able to enjoy sitting with the uncertainty.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you enjoy any future work of mine as well!