Nice to see. I'm not the only one that liked this vn more than most. You can tell as the story went on the wroter and it was learning and becoming more at ease with the story. There were some plot holes, though. Why are wolves so looked down upon? What's a kestrel(it's a bird)? Why does richter at times seem so snippy to Lyall, like when he compliments his hair repeatedly? Its clear Lyall likes guys who both wear a longer mane and care for it, as clearly Lyall takes great care of his own fur and mane(odd for most furs). Why did adrius start hating Lyall? They grew up together. What did people think of Lyall's previous relationship with Edan? I think Adrius is basically fully grown, hence the Napoleon complex