Great at setting a tone! It felt unsettling and had me gasping at some twists. It's a little wordy at the beginning, somewhat cryptic, and brutally punishing, but sticking with it had great payoff. Great work!
Thanks a lot, I appreciate the feedback and that you finished it.
I definitely felt like I had to trim that opening a bit or at least add more than a spew of text so I agree with you.
