"A VN written by a girl sick of reading straight sex scenes in peak fiction." you can really feel this through the VN. The love you feel for other famous VNs, and the frustration that it's all (mostly) painfully het, yeah, really relatable, and it was transmitted through your work really well.
The choice of bgm and sfx are really immersive. I enjoyed Jeanine's personality, being consumed by ennui is a trope often only delegated to male characters, so it's always nice to see a woman protagonist carrying the mantle for once. It's a shame it's only 1/3 of the story, but I liked what I read!