I like the idea of having a titan that consumes the objectives and in turn becomes more valuable points wise.
I do feel like there was a touch of overexplaining here and there. Sometimes it's unavoidable and examples are needed, but I think it's better if the rules are clear enough that examples aren't needed. The NPC AI is also a touch complicated/messy for my liking.
This mood board is, "chef's kiss."
I'd say this is a good mission that needs a touch of clean-up.