First of all, I want to say that my level of English is quite basic, so I apologize for any possible mistakes in this review.
In my opinion, this version is of good quality, and I especially liked the more interactive parts — that was a great idea. The continuation of the story is also well done. I particularly enjoyed Amber's part; while Bree’s story is good too, I personally liked Amber's more (this is mostly due to my own preferences). I won’t go into much detail about the rest of the story because I would just be repeating what I said in my previous reviews.
I did notice two inconsistencies:
At the beginning of the story, when drinking from Daisy, the character models don’t match. I realized this when I replayed it. I’m not sure how hard it would be to fix, but I wanted to let you know just in case.
In the first part of the forest chase, during the interaction with Bree, that section is not translated into Spanish. I'm not sure if the same happens in the other languages, but I'm mentioning it just in case.
Finally, I could say that more naked characters would be nice, since most of the acts +18 the characters are mostly in clothes and personally I don't really like them, (the latter is just my taste, so I just like it). I comment more as an opinion.
I really appreciate the Linux version. I know many people will play on other operating systems, but I'm grateful that you took the time to make a version for Linux, since it's the system I use on my rather old computer.
The game is on a good path, and I’ll be waiting for future updates to keep sharing my feedback. Good luck!