Concepts & Originality
Moodboard is cool and includes actual models and I think they are opr models and they're on theme.
Flavortext is short and to the point and opens up for a cool concept.
Rules Clarity
Some superfluous rules that only repeat core rules.
Not to many npcs.
The rules seem modestly complex. The NPC direction is fairly simple, they just stand and fight.
Adherence to Theme
Not entirely sure how things grow. It says grows your reputation in the flavor but that's a bit of a stretch.