I just finished this after your stream today. Wow! I was enthralled and lead along by Eleanor's characterization. I loved how the scene started with the baggy clothes mention, relatable to things I've known in my past. Felt that. Loved the art on Eleanor! I won't get too detailed with what i liked (you can ask me if that opinion at all matters) but i liked it :) you should totallllllly make more!