Short and sweet, liked the story you put together! Presentation wise you went for am ore minimalistic approach and I think it worked quite well, also liked the character faces on the dialogue boxes, they were nice. The floor pattern tho is something that could have a change, the screen seemed a bit visually busy with that chess pattern.
The music is pure catchy silly vibes, I think it kinda doesn't fit the vibe you guys are going for, but the tracks themselves are really fricking good, very catchy. The track used on the last room was fitting tho, very menacing.
Overall, Ficou fixolas, bom trabalho!