I feel like an intruder writing a comment for this game, but: Some of Eleanor's internal dialogue lines about loneliness and dealing with a work life that grows duller and duller by the day are going to stick with me for a while. I was not expecting that from a game jam game and I am not exactly sure what to make of it, but it does shows how good you are at conveying feeling.
Good luck with the jam, this is an impressive amount of work for a month and half game. This was really good, I think you have a shot.