I'll say that the way you write all of these intricate little interactions between Jim and the player literally has my jaw on the floor. Such high replay value just to explore every single choice because they matter, and they are all SO worth reading. The way you write tension is beautiful. I adore the way Jim acts as a character. He seems sharper and potentially more manipulative/possessive than he tends to try and act around the player. His little quirks feel so human while I feel the need to dissect why he does every little thing, or what his motivations are. There is just so much more to say because I'm awed & want to talk about every detail, but don't have the words rn. I just love the blue winter vibe of this game. I look forward to discovering more about Jim's character (being mean to him is hard but i kind of love it when he gets a lil angri and distant holyyyy). And of course, we loveee an author who gives MC a choice in her own decisions & personality aye. Anyway, tremendous work! <3