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So I gave it some thought. I know there was previously discord regarding the night scenes in the newest release, and I don't know if you have come to a decision on how to handle that, but I had an idea for you to consider, if you're willing. And it's something you could do without (I believe) affecting the plot in any way. 

Both scenes do feel forced and unnatural. However, I understand you were hesitant about giving an update with limited sexual content. So how about, instead, another dream sequence?

During the night, he still sees her sleeping with her tits exposed. Drop him groping her and instead just give the option to cover her immediately, or stare at her for a bit longer and cover her after. Regardless of which option he picks, she cracks her eye open for a moment as he is walking away. If he covered her immediately, then she finds it sweet. If he decided to stare first before pulling the blanket up, she once again thinks of him as a pervert, but maybe she's not too upset by that.

Either way, he dreams about her that night, especially if he peeked on her bathing earlier. The dream, and possibly more to follow, reinforce him seeing her in a sexual light. In fact, you could easily slip more dream (or even daydream) sequences in as a way of showing that he can't get her out of his mind. Which would be useful for you anytime you want to add a scene on an otherwise pure story update. It would also help explain why he lets himself fall into a relationship with her.

Give it some thought, dismiss the idea out of hand, either way I thought I would share. I look forward to the next release!