May I ask what needs improvement in your opinion?
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The assets in the 'find the gun' part are a bit samey, and I stuck in the building edges multiple times, and had to restart. A bit more direct guiding would be good also, bc now the player cant even begin to search for the gun. At first I thought that the screen noise is bc I shouldnt go there. The basic concept of the story could be good with enough polish, bc now its more funny than heavy and serious. The destination is good, but the execution is not getting the same emotional response as you may wanted to achieve