I just finished one of the endings, and honestly the game left me with more questions than answers. The mysteries and dialogue did not unfold naturally, and I couldn't understand anything of what was going on at all.
I understand it's a mystery game, but there was zero set-up for everything that happened or explanations. It's like the protagonist just accepted everything that happened to her without questioning a thing. Stuff and events just happen for the sake of it.
The transitions between chapters wasn't too smooth either which did not help with the narrative. The chapters were painfully short as well.
I will say that what I did like about the game were the two main LIs (the drawings are really cute), I will see the other endings in order to get a final opinion but I'm not too keen on what I saw for now. Kinda disappointed because you buy visual novels to fall in love with a story and the writing but this was not the case.
Thank you for your constructive feedback. We’ve taken note of everything you mentioned and will work on improving it. We’ll make sure not to repeat the same mistakes.
I'm not sure if you’ve played both routes yet, but they are connected to each other.
In any case, thank you again for sharing your thoughts.