Omg, I loved it. But it also made me cry so much. The concept is just so unique and I can't stop saying that I loved it. This story has great potential, but there are a lot of typos and even a few errors with missing if statements.
The only thing I would say is missing is more customisation, like actual outfits or haircuts. (Also, if you were to add a section for the male MC where he tries female clothing I would really love you.) but aside from that it was truly a 10/10