The game has great potential, especially with its core concept of burning memories—it's a powerful and emotional idea. However, I think it could benefit from some additional polish to fully deliver its impact.
Adding a calm, emotional soundtrack would help immerse the player and make them more aware of their actions. Right now, with everything happening quickly and without music, it's easy to miss the emotional weight of the experience.
In terms of visuals, while the minimalist stickman style works to some extent, using art with more expression or character could significantly enhance the emotional connection and make the world feel less empty.
Overall, I really like the direction you're going in. With a few adjustments, this could become a truly memorable and emotionally engaging game. Great work so far—I’m excited to see how it evolves!