Hello, my friend!
I wanted to congratulate you on the incredible game. I simply loved it!
But I would like to mention some possible problems that I saw in the game:
1. In the songs of the human and elven peoples, there is no difference between the High Elves and the Wood Elves, just as there is no difference between the Humans of the Empire and the Humans of the Jungles.
I think the game could be richer if it differentiated them.
2. On page 35, you talk about songs again, but you only repeat the ones that have already been presented. It would be great if new songs were created or perhaps a chapter with instructions on how to create new songs.
3. On page 15, you say that the Calling would define your Vigor, but that does not happen. In fact, at no point in the material do you explain how this happens. I imagine it is a d6 roll, as is the standard in Odds.
The game is incredible and I hope you continue working on it.
Please do not be offended by my comments. I only posted them here because I couldn't find any other way to contact you.
All the best to you!