So I’ve been going over this in my head a lot - I was pretty set on a three-act structure and have recently decided instead on two long and dense acts, which should give the concepts I have of serial killer investigation -> national conspiracy room to breathe.. I’d been kind of losing the will and getting directionless with it, so it’s a big relief to have that one kind of seismic idea that shifts it to it all being achievable again. Will post updates soon, but here’s some more art I made for it, once again in that teletext style I’m aiming for