Visual novels are notoriously hard to rate and this entry is definitely leaning more novella than visual novel, making that even harder.
I can see that the resources you dedicated this week went entirely into the writing, writing of which I enjoyed, and which is heavily in theme and big lesbians. You accomplished what you set out to do and you accomplished what you were trying to do well at that. I also enjoyed how you picked yukari and sakuya for this ship. A pretty rare ship of which I believe you gave enough time to breathe into the development you were going for.
Overall, I'm glad to have played this entry and am curious what you might do next jam.