Good game, definitely one of the better ones I've played on itch! There was a bug during the memory/dream sequence though. As I went to climb the ladder to the treehouse it just kept climbing into the sky and didn't stop. I had to start the chapter over again.
Voice acting during the flat tire/army shooting lasers into the sky could be better, sounded like clunky AI voices. And you can't run very fast for someone getting shot at haha.
Not many scares either (not sure if there's supposed to be), the biggest "scare" was the Helen jump-scare in the grocery store haha.
The dialogue feels a little clunky too. During the dream sequence the kids seemed to be talking like teenagers or young adults rather than kids. Or maybe that's just me.
If you smoothed out the story a bit, maybe added a little more to do at the farm so you could add more scares or really set the creepy vibe of aliens lurking around/weird forces lurking around.
There's a lot to work with here to where I think you can turn it into a 2 hour experience rather than 1 or less.
Either way, you're doing a good job. Definitely have a good experience on a similar level with Fears To Fathom here. Keep it up!