I speak Spanish, so if I didn't understand well, it was because of the translator.
And I saw that the characters interact well. But I don't know if Megumin calls Darkness or Kazuma a pervert. She doesn't usually call him a pervert that often. On the other hand, if she says it to Darkness when they're about to leave, it makes sense, since Darkness tried to rape Kazuma more than once when he was in a relationship with Megumin. It makes sense that she would threaten Darkness.
Hola! Unfortunately, completely avoiding NTR is very difficult. Because it would require creating alternative scenes, otherwise part of the audience would be left without content and scenes.
Regarding Megumin, I think we shouldn’t fully stick to the original. After all, this is a parody, and new events and rules for the characters are introduced here.
Kazuma won’t be deprived of attention, and he’ll have his chance. This game is something between NTR and harem. Each character has their own story, with an incredible number of characters surrounding them.
Thank you for your opinion and advice!
Thanks for answering me and listening to my ideas. I understand it must be difficult. I imagine you'd have to rework it and it would be a lot of work. So if you'd like to do something like that in the future, that would be great. It doesn't need to be very elaborate. Denying the NTR would only involve two dialogues. Doing the opposite would be, for example, Aqua looks back just when they're about to do something to her and smacks what comes out of there. All in a single dialogue. This would be with a two-option response: one being to look back and the other being the NTR option. It could be to do nothing. From there, Aqua would be left alone but without the NTR, so you wouldn't have to rewrite so much for Aqua to rejoin the party. This is just an example. If you decide to do this in the future, it would be fun and would bring in more audiences of both genders: those who like vanilla and NTR, or in my case, the avoidable NTR.
It's the same with Darkness, since she has her perverted side, but it's already been seen that it doesn't go that far, which is why she didn't want to marry Alderp. So, if there's a restatement of her own thinking, she'd say, for example, sitting next to Kazuma instead of sitting with the two boys.
If I'm being annoying with my answers, please tell me. I really don't want to be. I'm just excited because this project of yours has potential.
