That’s a delightful read. The writing is neat and the characters are fun. The bright visuals definitely elevate the vibe. I just wish the story kinda… punch harder? There are 2 big things going on, the heist and the romance. I feel like instead of strengthening the whole narrative, they kindof overshadow one another. Guess that’s the downside of having the story happen in a very specific and narrow window of time. Nevertheless, great work!