I would have loved a reveal at the end of it that the "life giving fluid" was only intended to be water, and that the result of using their substitute caused a massive orgy among all the wolves once the lifeforce returned, but all kidding aside, I really liked this entry. Interweaving porn with plot can be rather tricky, and there was a bit of a sudden escalation toward the end of the vn, however it feels like you intend to continue the story, in which case it will probably begin to feel a bit more balanced. Great showing! š