I'm not going to reiterate what everyone has commented in terms of the presentation and state of this one... my primary motivation is to try and encourage would-be creators to step up and give making their own vns a try. When you have a time limit, it forces you to make difficult decisions and rarely do game jam games live up to what the author hoped and intended, especially with a first-ever project.
I congratulate you on releasing something and having the guts to sit in on the stream, listening to everyone's feedback. Quite a number of people who sign up for the jam never reach that milestone.
That being said, I urge you to listen to what has been suggested. Some things may come across as blunt or hurtful, but there are some good ideas to help you improve on your next attempt. But please, don't give up on making fvns... use this experience as a stepping stone to grow and improve.