That’s quite a fun read! It’s just something you’d expect from a DnD adventure tale. The story and presentation are nice. Obviously, it’s not flawless. Some parts might feel a bit too blunt, but that’s the risk with this kind of genre: it needs a lot of visuals to deliver the vision better, but it’s way less feasible than just writing. There might be too many ideas packed in here, but it’s not that bad. Not if you approach it expecting some giggles. By the end of it, I kinda wished there were more. Well done!