OK. I'm intrigued. The best AVNs have three things. 1. Amazing visuals. Making the scenes convey the story in a way that the pieces all fit together. Check. 2. Dialogue that is understandable, and relatable to the characters. Proper grammar and slang matter to the audience so as to understand the characters better and how the story comes across. Check. 3. The story. It's important to have a premise that is interesting, and then follow through with the telling so that the audience continues to hang on til the end. Check, conditionally.
I am interested in this story so far. It appears at first glance that this has the makings of a masterpiece. Time will tell. I admit that I normally don't spend money until there is quite a bit of story available to make it worth waiting for. I also admit I didn't spend that much in this. But I was very curious by the description, and didn't want to stiff you completely just so I could try the prologue. If the first act is as good as the prologue, I will spend more upon the updates release. Can't afford the Patreon prices at the moment. But I might go ahead and buy into a month's worth at release time. Thanks for daring to write such a piece for us.