Technically speaking, everything is packed with superb quality. Not gonna say much about the visuals & audio bcs they are excellent.
The premise is interesting, but for some reason, I don’t think the narrative delivers the goal of the story that well. Don’t get me wrong, I think the story structure is clever. But if the goal is about telling a tale of someone embracing himself and finding the strength to come out of the closet, there is this… dissonance. I really cannot sympathize with the MC. I didn’t think the conclusion meets the sweet spot between satisfying, and making him redeemable. In fact, I hated how the MC got away with not enough consequences lol.
Maybe one of the reasons I felt that way, is that during the final act, there is somehow a shift in dynamic to be more telling with Kylliki as the mouthpiece. It just felt… less genuine on the MC’s part? It all just felt less grounded. While the epilogue serves as a logical narration to call the curtain, I found it slightly jarring. I kinda wish there were more sections of the IRL parts that show the other side of the MC’s struggles, because that part felt realistic.
Regardless, it’s a fantastic work. Whether or not it’s your intention, you just made a new human MC I despise so much, thank you very much.