Absolutely gorgeous! The visual is so stylized, I think it’s one of the best ones in the jam. Loving how the sprite is very expressive!
While the theme is quite a cliche, every element of the VN falls in place just right to deliver the beautifully painful tale. The writing is excellent. The idea that mundane little things can affect so much of the character’s life is well written. I just wish there were more. Sometimes I feel like the story is a bit too straightforward in a “telling” way. There is space to dig deeper into the MC’s psyche, elaborating more on the conversation on the rooftop. That being said, it still serves as a complete, satisfying read nonetheless.
Great work!