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This reminded me a bit of a couple of entries from last year, Cruising For Love and Murder and Werewolf’s Prison in concept.  You managed to get a lot of work done in a short amount of time with this one!  

I like the concept and the general direction of the story, but I would suggest trimming down a couple of parts, namely the spider dancing with the bunny, and then after the MC… it repeated quite often what a good dancer the spider was, and slowed the pace quite a bit, to the point it felt the spider was actually the main character at times.  Unless those two scenes are critical to the plot later on, I think making it around a third the size would probably be adequate.  

That aside, I do enjoy what you’re going for, and think there’s a good foundation here.  It currently feels like you could do this as a series, with each release being a ā€œweekly episodeā€ of the series.  Maybe adding a few other tropes of cheesy dating shows would add a little personality, like the ā€œone-on-oneā€ cam interviews with a producer, where they say one thing in front of the others, and say virtually the opposite in the personal interview.