Sorry I couldn't catch the stream live, I've been trying to attend all the ones I possibly can, and I always love seeing what you come up with, Gatr.
I like how you show the delusion and the actual scenes, and I see various hints to the colloquial 5 stages of grief, with denial being quite present throughout. It's not a one-step/one-cycle process either, especially when accompanied by what would have been such a traumatic situation for the main character to face.
I feel the pacing and scope was quite appropriate for the length of the game jam, and liked how you handled what would typically be quite a difficult story to tell with a single lone survivor with no one to interact with in a format that is generally dialogue-heavy.