Nice work Evelina!
0:15 transition made me want a harder arrival, heavier hitting.
I actually disagree with some of the others - I think the vibe and constant switching is simply a stylistic choice and was actually structured well, and wasn't actually that "out there." The transitions felt like they came in at the right points for what the song is aiming at being. I think what really would have sold it more for me is if there was more energy variability, as well as variability between staccato/legato and dry/wet reverb.
So, the mix was clean but the dynamics and variability in the mix could be bumped up a bit. Dynamics I think is the main thing I would focus on to improve this track.
That said, what you did was awesome, and I commend you for pushing the envelope and trying something new.