Just finished .4 with ch1 redone. Here are my thoughts so far.
First, this story is incredible. The originality, and urban fantasy elements make this a fun and engaging story. The artwork is very well done, as are the animations. I'm sure I'll be happy to start over when chapter 2 is reworked, and more content is available.
The characters are all individual, and special. The dialogue for each of them is believable. Nice jobe there. Except for a few spelling mistakes, the only dialogue mistake I saw was near the beginning, when the liquor store lady was yelling at Sasha. She said she'd call the polizia, not the police.
I am enjoying the shit out of this. The only negative for me is the bits of chaotic text and imagery. You know, those moments of high emotion that cause the characters to act like they are in an old Japanese cartoon. They are too unfocused and chaotic for my tastes. I realize this was done on purpose, it's part of the author's telling of the story. So I will live with it. Just voicing my opinion.
All in all, very well done so far, and I look forward to the next major update.