This was certainly quite the read, quite the kink too, but I can't help but feel bad a lot for the guy for majority of it, also damn the xenophobia on the MC, where I can understand there are people like that and I am quite glad that they talked about it, and fair enough I guess for where they are set at, but should I be rooting for them? Mainly because of the ending, some part of me says yes, another no, and I think it's neat I get to feel that way, although objectively what happened was pretty pretty bad...
But here's the thing I really disliked about the writing is the inclusion of specific Japanese words in place of phrases like "Thank you." I understand they're Japanese already, but then I wonder if they're speaking English or Japanese. If the MC complains a lot about foreigners, I assume they are speaking in Japanese, just translated to be understandable in English, and when they speak in Japanese it's like a double translate thing??? Maybe it's just me who feels odd about this one thing. Like I feel out of immersion when I read it.
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I’m glad you have conflicted opinion about the ending, it’s what I was looking for hehe.
And about the Japanese words, it’s funny cuz literally nobody pointed this problem until the stream of my vn on FVN, and now I’m reading your comment lmao. So the explanation, they talk Japanese, you as a reader read a translation in English so you could understand, but! The translation let slip some words in Japanese. The reasons are rather just to keep you in this Japanese bubble, adding more style in the writing, or just for fun.
Anyway thanks for your feedback!