I enjoyed Succubus Rejects a ton; enough to play through it three times to get all the endings. But what I really want to tell you is that I think Neon City Succubus looks to be a massive improvement over its predecessor in every way. The combat system is much more fun and engaging, especially with the new skill system and the synergies different skills have with each other. The diegetic phone interface is a great touch, and the interface in general is stylish. The fully animated (with physics!) sex scenes are super hot. And there are great improvements even to small details, like the more visible vision cones, or how Kanna's tail swings while walking.
I want to single out the seduction system a bit. It's far more engaging than Succubus Reject's instant seduction. But more than that, it’s really sexy and does a lot for the story, too. For example, I particularly like the seduction of the man south of Jack's Ramen. First Kanna clinically chooses to seduce him for PD Vouchers. Then her augments have her act as a completely different and super eager persona. Afterwards when the stranger compliments her, she's back to her normal self and isn’t sure how she feels about it. She may be choosing to use her superpowered sexuality, but even if she's enjoying herself in the moment, she's not used to what she’s doing. It's a great bit of storytelling.
Anyways, I want to thank you for both Succubus Rejects and Neon City Succubus. There's more I want to gush about, like how cool and sexy Kanna's model and outfits are. Or how the top-down view of 3d models works out so well in your games. Or...
I have two questions, if you don't mind. Do you have any other art online elsewhere? And are you planning on allowing your games to be purchased on itch.io? I would buy them if I could.
P.S. I do think Neon City Delivery has potential.
P.P.S. Your writing is good, but there are the occasional grammar errors or bits of awkward phrasing. If you don't mind, I could go over the text of your games with you to help improve some of it. I've helped a few authors proofread their stories before, though I'm only an amateur.
P.P.P.S. There's a bug with the Body Upgrade skill. After taking it and then healing to full health, the health bar in the CyberSu UI will be empty at its bottom. It goes back to normal when you're below full health.
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